LO4 Magazine draft one changes

 

The front page seems to be okay as it matches its conventions.

 

The editorial is okay however it needs to be signed.

 Most of this page matches the conventions. However there needs to be a larger image at the top to make the page more interesting. At the bottom of the page there is a space that is open, it could maybe contain an opinion or another image.

 This page does follow conventions however I believe it looks quite boring in comparison to the magazines I looked at. So to make this page I think i could make the image larger and informalize the layout a bit, I could also remove some of the text as the audience isn't reading the magazine to see lots of text. It could also do with a verdict of my personal opinion.

 This page also follows conventions well, however there is a bit of space at the bottom of the page so I could include a verdict, or some more images to make the page more interesting.

This page follows the conventions well. I could tweak some things to make the product look better.

LO3 Showing conventions of the genre

LO4 Evidence of proof reading

Evidence of proof reading.

LO4 Final finished magazine

LO4 Evidence of editing

The image above shows me making the fallout vault boy in illustrator to use on my front cover page. I did this to get past copyright laws as I will be using it as an image on my cover I won't be able to credit an actual picture of a vault boy to the proper people.

 In the image above, I am seen editing my interview image in photoshop. I edited in by cropping it to the size I wanted and also sharpening the image as it was slightly out of focus.

In the image above I am seen editing my editorial picture in photoshop. I did this to crop the image to the correct size and then I also used to spot healing tool to get rid of spots on my face. 

In the video above I edit my cover page in photoshop so that I get a final product that fits what I envisioned.

LO3 Editorial shoot risk assessment

LO3 Interview shoot Risk Assessment